fuuuuuuuckkkkkkk thiiiiiiiissssss stooooooooryyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy

are and i are working on something better




everything here is now rendered irrelevant.

[characters] Raff

(Are finished this up; colours etc. Major props to her for being, you know, amazing.)



This is stupid.

Simplistic DRRDRRDRR!Raff. His chaotic form gets a bit more.. special? later on, hurr. But here's its basic form; a giant, stupid weasel with too many eyes (and usually too many mouths as well). Hmm hmm.

Raff doesn't really know how to, ah, access his potential power, so he only really transforms if he's "tantalized". Uhh, I don't really feel like explaining much, since I actually hate Raff more than my other characters somehow. He's not much more of an asshole than anyone else.
He's actually quite young, only around 27 years old. Mana, in contrast, is more than 700 years old. Raff.. doesn't really know much about.. anything. He was originally a merchant from Tal (his skin and hair colour/texture is very typical of Tal), but after his chance encounter with Siegurd he wandered the world in a sort of haze, not very conscious; not quite a "manic" period, but unstable in form and mentality nonetheless. Eventually, Deszo found out about him and, thinking him too unstable, sent his brigade to exterminate him. ... of course, Raff, having the persistence of a cockroach, survives, being found by two small children (Marianne/Marigolde and Micah/Rubin(/Reuben)) who took him back to their town, give him a name (he.. doesn't remember much from before about a year before this), got him all fixed up, when... Deszo more or less finds him again, causes him to go chaotic, unfortunately Raff destroys the town and blah blah blah this makes more sense in my head. He's pretty much a lost puppy ONCE AGAIN after this, except more stable blah de blah blah blaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhhhhhh

Eventually ends up traveling with Sasha, Lorant, and Rudolf, Lorant absolutely hates him (it's mutual) since Raff's... not such a nice person. Oh I give up. I can't write coherently whenever I try to explain characters/story shit.

[characters] Reese & MunAyin

Mmm, Reese(SulReissma) and MunAyin are a great example of just how godawful my story is, but eh.
I redesigned them on a whim recently, since Reese used to look like some sort of awful clown and MunAyin was just... ffff lame. Plus they looked nothing alike, even though they're supposed to be twins. Wat. I only scanned the really rough concepts I did of Reese, since the MunAyin ones are.. even sloppier. Somehow. Eeegghghh I'm so out of it tonight ffdsghdghgf.



(these are pretty bad, but uhh- rough idea of Reese's design, tentative colourscheme)
Reese is actually incredibly short, but he wears whatever will make him appear larger/taller (i.e.: horrible horrible high heels) aaand he and MunAyin are assassins, though originally were, uh, just kids on the street. Even though they're twins, MunAyin is much, much taller than Reese, and his eyes are pale hazel, while Reese's are dark brown, and Reese is much more effeminate, lacking his brother's muscular build. They're each missing one eye; MunAyin lost his(left) protecting Reese, and Reese sort of.. took his own eye(right) out as a "pact" of sorts. (FFFFFFFFFFFT) MunAyin ends up "silenced" at the age of 15, which is a quasi-religious ceremony performed by the "cult" they're a part of, so he can't really speak.

Oh, and Reese calls MunAyin "Mava", it's a.. term of endearment.


I'd rant more, except most of the things about them are awful. I hate myself so much fffhurrrrr.

Christ I'm dead tired. Sorry for the sheer lack of sense/linear thought in this hurr hurrr.


(.. I don't think anyone looks at this anymore? Hmm oh well)
http://i459.photobucket.com/albums/qq311/tervuren/scan035.jpg
Reese and Raid (one of Are's characters) waiting out the rain after food shopping? And a mini map of the Empire, totally incomplete.

huh

I never really realized just how shitty my story is until I thought about some of the, ah, specifics. Wow. Yeeah I should probably ditch it.

Also somehow Mana is such a goddamn pedo. He.. was a priest, you know. And then there's Reese and MunAyin..

.. yeah.


.... yeeeeeeeah no.